Nowadays our life revolves around technology. Our life is influenced by social media and that the things we wear, our behavior and do are all influenced by social media. Social media can be fun and entertaining but it could also be a dangerous lace where people have no limit because they are talking from the back of the screen where they are unsupervised.You have to be safe on the internet because you can never know who you are talking to and that people on the internet are unsupervised unlike talking in real life face to face people act differently. Cyber bullying is a problem that effects a lot of people on the internet and social media and this problem can have very bad effects on your mental health or even your physical health.
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ReplyDeleteYour ideas are good but you have many grammatical errors. You have to read your writing out loud and make sure it makes sense before publishing. I feel you are writing as your mind tells you, therefore you have many run on sentences.